Education Assessment-Reflection/Interviews

Dear Addelaide,

I hired you to write this “reflection” paper for me. I have received feedback from a couple of sources and need to have the necessary corrections made.

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The 5 sources are actual teachers I interviewed. I do not need outside sources. Maybe with a little rewording you can take out some of the sources that were incorporated.?


I would recommend changing “Lessons from the Conducted Interviews” to be written from your point of view, to make it clear these are the interviews you conducted. I would worry less about following proper research paper protocols and adjust it to be a reflection paper from your point of view. – I became confused in this section when you cited a source, because now I’m not sure if you were talking about the teachers you interviewed or other, unknown teachers. I would consider removing the language that you cited from other sources so it is clear this paper is a reflection regarding the teachers you interviewed.
On page 2, when you reference 80% of the teachers, are you saying 80% of all teachers or 80% of the teachers you interviewed use dishonest methods. Again, I think if you write this from an “I” point of view, this will be clearer.
Also, on page 2, can you help us understand what you mean by “cheating” and being dishonest and “malpractice”? Is it that the teachers are using actual test materials to prepare students?
Page 4, last paragraph, I don’t think you meant “leaners.”
Page 5, first paragraph, sentence 3, was it your intent to say that although students have unique strengths and should be encouraged, not all of them are special?
Page 5, last paragraph, first sentence, it sounds like there was only one interview with 5 teachers, rather than multiple.

Thanks for editing this a bit. 🙂

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