You wrote this paper earlier (first draft), my professor left some comments on what to change and add could you do this these were his comments,
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What is the long-term unemployment rate in us and Mexico?
This research is based on primary data that was collected from the investigation carried out among citizens of Mexico and the USA who were willing to seek employment. Several hypotheses were formulated to enable the process of data collection to be more comfortable. From the findings, a comparison will be carried out between the countries and make conclusions based on data gathered. Questionnaires were the preferred method for collecting data through surveys. The quantitative data findings will be analyzed and compared using descriptive statistics. The inquiries were structured and formulated as follows:Survey QuestionsYesNo● Did you do any work for a payment or profit?● Have you been absent from work recently?● Have you been looking for work for the past 1 week?● Would you consider returning to work if recalled?● Are you temporarily absent from your job?● Have you received income either dividends or interest in the past one month or year? ● Are you permanently employed?
Musa Ayar, Apr 27 at 3:37pm
This language is quite technical.
Musa Ayar, Apr 27 at 3:39pm
The article gives a lot of information but does not say much about long term unemployment.
Musa Ayar, Apr 27 at 3:40pm
“The long term unemployment rates in both Mexico and the USA concerning GDP show that The USA is almost five times the population of Mexico which has a population of about 12.6 million people.” does not make any sense.
the paper needs to be 1400 words without appendix
and have 7 sources
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