Essentially I need someone to add to/edit my 10 page draft into a 15 page Final draft. I’m writing about trying to integrate the financial basics with Virtual Gaming. Schools don’t teach students anything about finances at a young age, and I believe that it’s important enough they should. So, I want to try to make something that attracts the young generation, what better than Virtual Reality.
I’ll attach my draft along with an annotated PDF with feedback to run off of.
Outline of a well-written Thesis/Project includes
Abstract: A summary of the objectives and accomplishments. 1 page typically.
Introduction: Describe the main concept of the thesis/project. Establish the context. Describe the problem you set out to solve and the solutions you have achieved. Discuss why this problem is important. Briefly describe the problem and development process you will follow.
Background and Literature Review: Provide a survey and a critical review of related prior work.
Design and Analysis: Describe the research design, including the sample size of the research context. If applicable, describe software reuse, design patterns, special coding techniques, etc. Describe your rationale for the design decisions with supporting data collected from prior studies. Describe the specific tools and techniques used in subchapters if applicable. Describe the problem, enhanced with a theoretical model to support your research /project design. Describe the research questions (quantitative) and or the phenomena of interest (qualitative).
Results: Describe the results of your research/Project. Describe unexpected findings, outliers, if any. Validation of results: Describe the validation approach. Describe sample test plans and test results.
Discussion: Describe how your research/project solved, addressed or explained some the issues defined in the background and literature review
Conclusions: Summarize your statements
References or Citations
Your final submission this semester should be formatted in the same manner as your final submission next semester. In other words, it should have the required headings (Introduction, Background, Design and Analysis, Results, Discussion, Conclusions, and References) and APA format.
In this submission, the Introduction, Background, Design and Analysis should be complete. There should be a draft of the Results, Discussion, Conclusions, and References sections. The Discussion and Conclusions should have some vision or work projection statements for next semester.
While an abstract is not required this semester, it would help you to scope your thesis or project and keep you focused.
Or for your project, besides the above contents, you should list the problems you encountered, how to resolve them, what kind of issues still exist, and what do you get from your project and so on. You can use screenshots, tables, graphics, and any other tools to show what you have done.
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